Question by Fly Far Far AWAY: Can you please help me and tell me if my resume looks good?!?!? PLEASE HELP!?
i changed some info so its not my real info but please tell me if its good and what u should change if its lacking or some things look weird. Thanx
and I have the heading 2 different ways which is best in your opinion??
im applying for a Verizon Wireless Customer Service Representative
Sarah S. Smith
422 Edison Street
Pittsburgh, PA 16101
(212) 555-555
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CUSTOMER SERVICE REPRESENTATIVE/ 9 YEARS CUSTOMER SERVICE RELATIONS
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Sarah S. Smith
422 Edison Street
Pittsburgh, PA 16101
(212) 555-555
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Highly-qualified, experienced customer service representative offering:
•Nine years experience in customer service
• Ability to work effectively and multi-task in an extreme high volume environment
•Enthusiastic, friendly and professional
•Great interpersonal skills
•Highly organized with extreme attention to detail
•Excellent leadership capability
•Superior internet, telephone, and computer skills
•Team Player
Experience:
Movie Gallery
(6/2009 – 3/2010)
Sales Clerk
Pittsburgh, PA 16101
•Answer members questions about movies, product availability, specifications and cost
•Ring up orders on a cash register and balanced drawer precisely
•Check-in movies, refill candy/soda/popcorn etc, keep store clean, organize displays
•Assist customers with appropriate membership upgrades for their specific needs
National City Bank
(11/2008 – 4/2009)
Bank Teller
Pittsburbh, PA 16101
•Receive, process, and distribute money when customers make deposits, payments, write checks or withdraw savings from their accounts.
•Required to meet monthly sales goal s of specific bank products, accounts, credit cards, and loans
•Cash payroll checks, receive loan payments, issue traveler’s checks, money orders, savings bonds, and gift cards.
• Maintain confidential bank and customer information
7-Eleven
(1/2008 -11/2008)
Sales Associate
Pittsburgh, PA 16101
• Greet customers and provide prompt, fast and courteous customer service
•Maintain a clean, customer friendly environment in the store
•Ring up sales on cash register accurately and process returns, refunds, food stamps, checks and money orders
•Operate a complex lottery machine
Bank of America
(9/2007-1/2008)
Customer Service Rep – Credit Card Department
Moosic, PA 18507
•Assists customers with questions or concerns regarding their accounts
•Knowledge of credit card terms and conditions
•Refer customers to the appropriate business products and upgrades
•Required to achieve targeted monthly goals
Joes Locksmith Company
(9/2004-8/2007)
Office Assistant
EggHarbor, NJ 12345
•Order office supplies and monitor inventory
•Conserved files and bookkeeping
•Maintained appointment schedules
•Heavy telephone contact
Education:
Sandy Hills High School
(9/2001 – 6/2005)
Eggharbor, NJ 12345
High School Diploma
Thanks for tips!
Yes i know it looks long but when I print it out is 2 pages long with the 2nd page only 1/3 the way down and I did use size 11 font 
thanks!
Best answer:
Answer by garylee
Your second one looks very good, however, you want to try and keep your resume to one page, if possible. Anything more than that is considered wordy. Remove unnecessay items, and try an 11 font if you need to.
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